a poem i wrote

[Sondog]

Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.

 

[rockerbaby]

what a good little poem. I like it Sondog. Praise Him!!!

 

[Sondog]

Thanks, rockerbaby!

 

[Createdtoworship]

that was good. sounds more like a rap than a poem(not that im knockin it i loved it) god bless. keep writing its a great gift.

 

[burgeon]

Jesus is Lord!

Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.

Hi, sondog!


Fun! You are creative.

Your Sister in Christ,
Dr. Bon Vie

 

[Chad]

Interesting

 

[Princess487]

that's so cute, i like it. God bless you

 

[Sondog]

Glad it blessed someone.

Chad, interesting is an interesting word...

 

[Jesuslovesu]

I also enjoyed it ! Good Job!

 

[yegoryeliz]

Praise The LORD!

Great Job. :thumbs_up it was a blessing, especially the last part. If ur held together with God's love nothing can break you away from him!!!!

 

[Sondog]

Thanks so much for the encouragement! Glad it spoke to people. The best thing about the peom is that it is true -- God really did deliver me from those things (and more).

 

[snowflake]

Good poem!
Ruth

 

[Jei_263]

That was awesome! i wish i could come up with something like that...
Stay Real
Jei
X

 

[uknowme]

wow thats great.....
thanks for sharing

god bless
kara

 

[Mary_429]

The poem was great, thank you for sharing it with us. God bless

 

[Sondog]

thanks. glad you liked it!

 

[sister]

Poem

That was a cool poem!Yes it could be a rap song!Gods love does hold us together!Its all we need!Keep writing!I write poetry too!Love,Sister.

 

[tranquility]

Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.

Well that was perfect!

I guess some of us have it, and some of us don't.