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a poem i wrote

Sondog
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Sondog

#1
Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.

 
C
Member

Createdtoworship

#4
that was good. sounds more like a rap than a poem(not that im knockin it i loved it) god bless. keep writing its a great gift.
 
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Registered Member

burgeon

#5
Jesus is Lord!

Sondog said:
Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.
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Hi, sondog!


Fun! You are creative.

Your Sister in Christ,
Dr. Bon Vie
 
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Member

yegoryeliz

#10
Praise The LORD!

Great Job. :thumbs_up it was a blessing, especially the last part. If ur held together with God's love nothing can break you away from him!!!!
 
Sondog
Member

Sondog

#11
Thanks so much for the encouragement! Glad it spoke to people. The best thing about the peom is that it is true -- God really did deliver me from those things (and more).
 
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Member

sister

#17
Poem

That was a cool poem!Yes it could be a rap song!Gods love does hold us together!Its all we need!Keep writing!I write poetry too!Love,Sister.
 
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Member

tranquility

#18
Sondog said:
Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.
Click to expand...
Well that was perfect!

I guess some of us have it, and some of us don't.
 
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