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witty writers wacky work! aka my poem

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hello this is witty writer thanks for coming to see my poem... It starts off kind of gloomy but it has a happy ending! with jesus everything has a happy ending eventually, no matter what you go through.
MY JOURNEY
My eyes tear and my fingernails tear, as I claw my way up this crumbling stone wall. Alone I look above, to the brilliant face of the sun. It shines down on me as I struggle to rise beyond. In this deep well of hurt, Im surrounded by looming darkness. I beat on the walls of this cage, my well of sadness and rage. Life sneers down at me from above and people throw rocks at my face. Trying to break my will and faith. The clouds threaten and my well starts to fill with acid rain. Drowning me as I die again. Tears gather in the back of my throat. I scream "why" and choke.As I sink in a million drops, my heart seems to stop.I long for the wind in my hair, but now my soul is left bare. I rise and rise. I slowly reach the peak. As I leap over my breaking point, there is nothing under my feet. I feel strength grasp my hand and it saves me from falling again. I look up at what stands before me and see that Jesus is holding me. He has come to gather me up and take me away. As happiness washes over me, I am free. God saves me and His love inspires me to start over again. I race away ready to begin a new day.
by julie aka wiity writer. tell me what you think of this if you want and I hope you enjoyed this bye!!!
 
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wow... I'm at a loss for words! I really enjoyed that Julie! I'll be lookin forward to reading more of your work! God Bless you sister!
 
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im so glad you liked it al god bless you i really enjoyed reading your perception and i am so glad jesus has found us all my next poem is a bit different it's called MACHINE...coming soon to a thread near you!!
 
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very nice

very good, heartfelt words.


wittywriter said:
hello this is witty writer thanks for coming to see my poem... It starts off kind of gloomy but it has a happy ending! with jesus everything has a happy ending eventually, no matter what you go through.
MY JOURNEY
My eyes tear and my fingernails tear, as I claw my way up this crumbling stone wall. Alone I look above, to the brilliant face of the sun. It shines down on me as I struggle to rise beyond. In this deep well of hurt, Im surrounded by looming darkness. I beat on the walls of this cage, my well of sadness and rage. Life sneers down at me from above and people throw rocks at my face. Trying to break my will and faith. The clouds threaten and my well starts to fill with acid rain. Drowning me as I die again. Tears gather in the back of my throat. I scream "why" and choke.As I sink in a million drops, my heart seems to stop.I long for the wind in my hair, but now my soul is left bare. I rise and rise. I slowly reach the peak. As I leap over my breaking point, there is nothing under my feet. I feel strength grasp my hand and it saves me from falling again. I look up at what stands before me and see that Jesus is holding me. He has come to gather me up and take me away. As happiness washes over me, I am free. God saves me and His love inspires me to start over again. I race away ready to begin a new day.
by julie aka wiity writer. tell me what you think of this if you want and I hope you enjoyed this bye!!!
 
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