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The Love of Jesus

Cody

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I am suppose to write a poem for english class, so I decided to write one about Jesus, tell me what you think.



The Love of Jesus


I wake up and thank him for another day
I thank him for the chance to pray
But I can never thank him enough
He picks me up when life gets rough

He puts me down when life gets too high
Wipes away the tears when I cry
He loves me and that is for sure
I was going to hell, but him dying on the cross was the cure

I’d like to touch the hem of his garment
Just to feel some of his torment
All my sins were washed away
Now I don’t have to worry everyday

Love is what kept him on the cross
Not the nails or the boards that were ran across
We killed Jesus because we sin
We're the ones that put those marks in his skin

Put the holes in his hands
And beat him till he could not stand
After all he went through
People still break his heart in two

Denying his Holy name
They need to realize that this is not a game
Because one day they'll lift their eyes in shame
And the only world they will ever know is a world full of pain




Cody Watters​
 
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I think that is a lovely poem cody.

Well done I am sure they will be pleased to read that one.

God bless :love: :rainbow: :rose:
 
Deep

It was very deep and spiritual defining the elements of Christianity and our Lord Jesus Christ. Great Poem!
 
Great poem, cody. You never cease to surprise me. You have many strengths and talents.

The Lord is using you, Cody.
 
Actually one of the best poems I've read here in the forums!

Great work brother, GOD bless
 
Wonderful poem Cody, it's really good, thank you. If your teacher isn't a believer, I pray the Lord may use your poem to touch their heart.

God Bless You
:love: Calluna
 
Cody2, your poem had the same effect on me that the film "The Passion of the Christ" had. Powerful.

Mary
 
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