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Altered

Anglican

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We are being altered
By The One who loves us so
Subtle little changes
That you'd never even know
Takes away our passions
For the things that aren't quite right
Changes our opinions
Though it isn't overnight.

Then we meet the hurdles
The past that holds us down
Chained by indiscretions
In which we want to drown
Waiting there so patiently
To help us with our pain
He will guide us through it
The sun will shine again.
 
Takes away our passions
For the things that aren't quite right
Changes our opinions
Though it isn't overnight.

^this was my favorite part of this poem. very profound and good wording choice. really brought out a unique substance which i felt this
short lived piece was all about. keep it up. id like to read more...
 
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