A Spell

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cotton

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:omg: As once dull, a midnight vapor to me, something that seem to exist, suddenly fades immediately. Puzzling, struggling, confusing, signs of intent, hesitantly eager to consent
Can I be drawn, yet I resist to insist that this emotion, Oh no, it's not real[ Then so, what is it? One say love, thee other hate. Yet so strong, both do cast a spell, one of joy, one, sorrow/I, emotions that yours, then some that are borrowed ! You've got me! I'm hooked, something to tell, my entrapment in a spell.:secret: :girl: :lightning ]​
] Only Experience Will Help You Understand
 
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:omg: As once dull, a midnight vapor to me, something that seem to exist, suddenly fades immediately. Puzzling, struggling, confusing, signs of intent, hesitantly eager to consent
Can I be drawn, yet I resist to insist that this emotion, Oh no, it's not real[ Then so, what is it? One say love, thee other hate. Yet so strong, both do cast a spell, one of joy, one, sorrow/I, emotions that yours, then some that are borrowed ! You've got me! I'm hooked, something to tell, my entrapment in a spell.:secret: :girl: :lightning ]​
] Only Experience Will Help You Understand
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I don't understand your phrase "hesitantly eager to consent". The words "hesitantly eager" are a contradiction in terms; they cancel each other out.


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Good mornig, what it means is that , sometimes your will is so strong so committed,but then there's sometimesd a voice of doubt, reason some type of insecurity even though the will is so strong. You might not be able to feel where I'm coming from and that's ok, thanks for reading. God delivered me from hatred and feeled me with love 6yrs. ago.
 
Very deep Cotton!
I like it how "hesitantly eager" cancels each other out... Like when Romeo talked of his love being a heavy lightness (well something like that)
Excellent poem...
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