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A writer's words...

Redliner

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First off...I usually write to a song that I create in my mind...like a super computer I create the voices, and instruments...God is truly amazing!

I'll give you a taste since I have plenty of writings:

this one is simply a poem:

“When”

When I do things right,
When the doors of my homes are open…
And a breeze blows through the windows,
When I see things through,
The way I always do.

When I’ve struck a chord with this world…
With this life around me;
When the world is on my shoulders…
And I have it all under control;
When I am the law…
And when I am just;

When I am understanding,
When I have all the answers;
When everything that ever has or ever will:
Is made new by the touch of my hand;
When I do not sleep for rest
When I’m everywhere at once…
When I always am…
And I always will be.

But this perfection is not mine..
I could never do these things…
Still one day I’ll be blameless and free…
-The day I understand the inverse of:
“When”.



now for one of my song type writings...Think "Switchfoot":

"Wait, Everyone's Not?"

Everyone's looking for love,
Everyone's looking for love,
-Looking for legal drugs...

We want more than hugs...
We want emotion,
-We go through this redundant motion.

We want it now,
We need it now...
We're so desperate for love...

Everyone's trying so hard,
Wanting love the more,
We're not searching for it anymore...

We're re-inventing love now,
We need love now,
-Now it's almost pay-per-view.

Now we just do it to see,
We look to see if it's true...
-We obviously don't know anymore...

Divorce rates...Blind dates,
Everyone's looking for love...
-No, we're re-inventing it.

We're not looking for love,
We're re-inventing it...
One date's all it takes...


You were both fishing for love,
Now you've crossed your lines,
-But you were fishing for love...

Looking for love,
Now you're up late
Talking on and on...

'till late night talks become,
Late night tears...
-We're making our own pain now...

Everyone's trying just to hard,
Everyone's still fighting it out inside...
-We are who we've been...

Everyone's doing it,
Again...and again.
-Until your heart's long broken gone...

Stop looking for love,
Stop trying to fill the void...
-Feel the emptiness inside...

Fill the emptiness... In time,
Love will find you,
-If you wait...

Hey! Just to let you know,
Everyone isn't looking for love...
-I'm waiting...
 
Awesome Songs!

First off...I usually write to a song that I create in my mind...like a super computer I create the voices, and instruments...God is truly amazing!

I'll give you a taste since I have plenty of writings:


Hey! Just to let you know,
Everyone isn't looking for love...
-I'm waiting...

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And the only one thing we are usually blind to, the most is true love.
And the funniest part is we always had it.

GOD'S LOVE & the Love of our Beloved savior Jesus Christ.

I know, I know some people might say - that's not what they meant.

Your talking about human love, compassionete love.

The kind of love that loves you back with hugs, laughter & understanding, loving you for who you are.

But, did you know we all are already being loved that way?

And get this, it's a perfect love!

For this love comes from The Almighty GOD HIMSELF, and also through HIS Son Christ Jesus.

Oh! And about the hugs & laughter? That's all included, too!

If you talk with The Almighty GOD & tell HIM what you need, if you love HIM - HE will hear you.
{John 14:13-17,21,23-26}

It might not be the one answer that you were hoping for, but it would be the one answer that HE feels you need.

Be payeint with HIM & all ways try to understand HIS answers, to you.
{James 5:7}

If you do not understand the answer, ask HIM to make it more clear to you. {James 1:2-6}

James 1:5
5 If any of you lacks wisdom, he should ask God, who gives generously to all without finding fault, and it will be given to him.


And always ask for things, through your Only Begotten Son Christ Jesus.
{John 14:13-17,21,23-26}
 
thank you for the encouragement!

I wrote this about the people who always feel they must be dating someone...and for those who think they are in love but it's not true because they are in love with an image (that they've made) of that person...not the person for who they are...and definitely not unconditionally.

Here's another one:

"Everyday a Crossroads"

Verse~1:
Everyday's a crossroads when you're running high or running low.
Everyday's a crossroads no matter when you wake up where you are.
Everyday is new...
-When the future comes to...
-It's there in front of you;
-Don't give up!
-Don't go to sleep,
-But...
-------------------------------
Chorus:
Just wake up...
-Remembering...
-Remembering that:

Life is a crossroads,
Day by day we choose to stand, walk, run, or crawl;
We look a head and carry on...
-Or we let up and die...
-Away!Away!Away!
It is up to us to see it through...
-We can make it...
-We will make it through.
-------------------------------
verse~2:
Now it's there in front of you...
-Are you afeared or running strong?
It won't be long before another intersection juts out before your feeble heart...
It won't be long before that intersection passes by...
-When you realize who and what you are and who you've been can't stop you from:

-Being who you wanna be...
-Seeing what you wanna see...
-Believing what you've convinced yourself is right and wrong...

Pass that intersection on your own...
-Don't give up!
-Don't go to sleep.
-But...
(chorus)
-----------------------------
Bridge:
We will fall,
We will fail,
We must come to intersections,
Every moment of everyday...
-face them fierce!
-face them fierce!
Always...
Always...
Always...
-Be prepared to prevail!
-Just wake up everyday...
(chorus)
 
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