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i hope u appriciate my poem, sorry if its offending, i just broke up with my gf!


Standing in the edge of world
I dont have anything
That i want from this world
Oh tonight, i'll make it right
I will die

Walking down the dirty street
And thers nothing thats not
Thats not with in my league
Oh tonight, i will fly
I can fly

Looking at you for the very last time
I am so high
Now i have no place to hide
And you know, and you know, that i tried

Rockstar,Popstar everybody dies
All my red tears
They wont be dry tonight
And i know its too late for tomorrow

Cussing the hollywood sign
Watching the skool girls walk
Watching the madness in their eyes
Because of that they they leave
with broken heart, oh stupid valentine

I'm here in a very dark street
And theres no one here to protect me
To make my nightmares go away
It has to blow
It has to shine
So hard

Looking at you for the very last time
Dont say goodbye
I know its all just a lie
And girl you know that i tried


Rockstar,Popstar everybody dies
All my red tears
They wont be dry tonight
And i know its too late for tomorrow

Turn of the radio please
I am crying here for days
Bad drugs bad girls bad influence
Kill all those pimps away

falling down in the boulevard
I'm falling down so hard
Falling down fast
And i cant stop
THe Little voices in my head

I dont sleep i dont dream
I just shut them up
Now i am screaming RUN AWAY!
its the last time
the last time

Looking at you for the very last time
Dont say goodbye
I know its all just a lie
And girl you know that i tried

Rockstar,Popstar everybody dies
All my red tears
They wont be dry tonight
And i know its too late for tomorrow

Before the madness in my eyes
Turn straight night,
All these drama, all these bleeding heart
I'm gonna cut myself, till the pain wear off
and girl you know i will get what i want
yeah, yeah, yeah,

All your "love" and promises is like a billion dollar bill
It was east to forgive it was hard to forget
And i know its to late for me tomorrow
yeah, yeah, yeah

Yesterday's bliss or tomorrow's ordeal
I am looking at you
Why do u look back at me?
And i know its to late for tommorow

Yeah you want me to be your bestfriend
I will give it to you
I will throw it in your face

and my inocennt hear gone mad
Baby, i was well
ROCK N' ROLL BABY
I will do what i want, YEAH!

You and me why we are not meant to be?
The keys to our dream its all just blue
theres no food thers no water
thers no even forever
Its gonna be hardcore
i love you more than my soul

I hear voices screaming in my head
i am here dying in my bead
it is punk, it is grunge thats why its kool
its not snoop dog, its not 50 cent thats going to kill me

And all my life
I realise
Why do i love you more than myself
I am neglected, rejected
I am betrayed, i am abused
I am fooled

and all the things in this world
brings me pain and tears
until you come in my life
not realizing you will give me a grief

I love you so much, but i am not twenty one
i am here praying that your the one
i have feelings
I have feelingd because i am a human
but Oh pls baby forget what i said


Standing in the edge of world
I dont have anything
That i want from this world
Oh tonight, i'll make it right
I will die
 
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Love can be hard to understand

:love:

A strong, passionate but pained poem

Reminds me a little of the plight of Romeo and Juliet - remember those deaths were passionate but a disaster, a mistake

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On re-reading I have edited because I'm sorry I never realised you wrote this as a reslut of a heartache. May God be right by your side. He's always so close at the toughest times.

Look more clearly at that single set of footsteps and you will see He's carrying you especially when your heart is at its heaviest.
 
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Dying never makes any thing right, it's just the wroung end of the wroung stick. Only one death I know of made any thing right, but then that was God incarnate, and it made a lot of wroung right. Only one I know.
 
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wow,.....thats really good...!!!
i can kinda understand what you feel like....but hey better days will come!!!
I read once that if you dont give god all the pieces from your broken heart he will never be able to fix it....
so yeah dont know what else i could tell you.....
really liked your poem!!!

god bless
kara
 

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