The true victim

[Johna]

Night Or Day
A Tempest Keep
At Freedoms Gate
A Chance To Sleep
Despair And Strife
A Two Fold Might
That Keeps An Heart From Freedoms Light
Bound And Scared Hope Deferred
The Sum Of Years Of Broken Words
No Counsel Shared To Understand The Strength Of Chains In
The Heart Of Man
A Castaway In Darken Seas
Where Only God Can Make Man Free.

Author Johna.

 

[Gracealone]

Love your poem.....especially the last phrase, "Where only God can make man free."

I see a poem that speaks of our struggle in life, and a heart that comes to the cross .......at last. Beautiful!

 

[ShepherdsHorn]

Very insightful

I like this and think it's insightful. It reminds me of the verses about the suffering servant in Isaiah. "He shall be pierced for our transgressions." I also like the theme of freedom from captivity. Good job.

 

[Johna]

Thank you , shepherdsHorn for your comment , I am Glad that it touched your heart. Lord Bless you and your endevor to Be like him .

 

[ShepherdsHorn]

Thank you Johna

Thank you Johna, I indeed was touched by your poem. I put one of mine up but no one has commented on it yet. Are you new here too? So am I. Would you mind if I added you to my friend list?

 

[all4jesus17]

Hey this rocks! Keep writeing . God Bless You.
~Melanie