My first poem to god

[Coriolis]

So I have been writing some poems in the past, but this is my first one about god, so I wanted to share it with you fellow Christians. God is Great!

Dear God,
you know we aren't strangers anymore,
for I have been following your rules for so long.
My full commitments I shall give to you,
for I know how you want me.
Lord I want to tell you me feelings,
please lord, make me understand.
For you are the Lord,
who will never give me up
never let me down. I know that Jesus will
never run around and desert me.
Lord, you will never make me cry,
to my soul you will never say goodbye,
for you will never tell a lie or hurt me.
Amen.

 

[Mr.Handy]

Amen, brother. You should think of going into music as a career.

 

[WilliamR]

I agree, I also enjoyed this poem